my poems sucks

Lelah Sudah penat aku bermadah Juga digunakan bahasa mudah Dikatanya susah Dikatanya payah Aku mula lelah Dipujuk sudah Dirayu sudah Sudahlah Ego semakin gagah Tak mampu aku musnah Aku kalah Luka dihati semakin parah Sabar yang tipis semakin lemah Baiklah Aku menyerah Sudah menjadi lumrah Makhluk yang asalnya tanah Asyik melihat langit yang gah Lupa pada yang dibawah Harapan semakin punah Untuk melihat esok yang cerah Bak kata arwah Hidup tak selalunya indah. Even in malay it sucks -_- - wolf

Take my loving Take my yearning You see me breathing But I'm not living Year by year It's getting worst All my fear Starting to burst Confiscate my spirit Shred it and kill it What's left inside me Is all dry and empty My existance Is fading away Your arrogance Is overplay All these running Is really tiring I'm here just floating Wishing I was sleeping All along just dreaming These terrifying feeling Are suffocating Me. I don't feel like raya. - wolf

Alone again In here I stand Hey wall hey pen Will you be my friend? I carved a world From line to line In this wonderland I made a friend We sang a song We danced along We cracked some jokes We drank some cokes I lifted my lids Such blurry sight Two angry clowns Were in a fight The looked at me Eyebrows down They screamed and shouted With ugly frown They slammed the door Shattered glass on the floor Alone again In here I stand I picked one up I leaked my finger I drip it in a cup I took my painter That's on my bed I started to colour My wonderworld red Old poem. That's why it sucks. - wolf